SGA beta?

Excuse the division of and subsequent repost of a part of my last post, if you have already read this.

I started my first SGA fic tonight. Anyone care to beta as I go along? I'm afraid I'm not used to writing so many people so I'll need help with that. And then I don't know what all the gadgets are called yet (or even if they all have names since Shep doesn't like to let Ford name them) and other little quirks, like who can speak Latin, or what colloquialisms Shep uses. All that on top of the usual stuff. So, anyone up to the challenge?

Reviews and a vid you MUST watch

24:

MUCH better than last week. I figured that the...familial, situation was really the way it ended up being. It was too easy otherwise. And OMG what about that ending?! Hardcore.

Jack PWNS me.

Studio 60:

And they just keep getting better. More of the AMAZING Danny/Jordan. Loved Jack and Kim's father ("Why do you do it?" "It's fun." Ahahaha!!). I liked Jack with Kim (No, not like that, I mean the little convo they had. Poor guy.). Matt and Harriet=WHOA. Tom+Lucy=so damn cute.

But the best. The best was Tomothy Busfield and his animals. OMG I was laughing so hard.

My favorite line (concerning the snake, ferret, and coyote):
"Yote made his debut in The X-Files. Been doing this ever since."

Dear Aaron,

YOU WIN.

Your biggest fan,
Lucy

Heroes:

Now, due to 24, I managed to catch the last, not shitting you, 30 seconds. And here's what I have to say:

Ha. Ha. AHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!!!

And now, I found this wonderful youtube link via another Heroes fan and I had to share. If you're a heroes or Sam fan (not directly related, but you will laugh and understand why I'm suggesting it to you) you must not walk, or just click. You must RUN to this video.

Peter is Emo